Sunday, October 12, 2008

Contrast Essay Paragraphs 1 and 2

My sister and I can doubt deny that we are family. We both look just alike. Although I'm older than her by five years we could probley pass as twins because we are identical. Alot of people get us mixed up alot. Just because we look alike doesn't mean we act alike. Our personalities are different and alot of things that we do are different also. Our activities, personalities, attitudes, and life styles complete opposites.
My sister Morgan is 13 years old and she is wicked energetic. She makes sure that she is always part of some type of sport whether it's basketball, field hockey, track, soccor and softball. She is by far a lazy girl. Morgan has a horrible attitude tho. She has a attitude where she always thinks she right, and there is no changing her mind when she has it stuck in her head that she is right and that's that. Her way of dressing and thinking is very aqward, least I think so. She is just like a typical teenager in some ways but other's she isn't. Yes, she is boy crazy. She changes boyfriends like people changes their socks, which is daily. The way she dresses though is different. She would rather be in a pair of jeans and a baggy shirt on with her etnies. Oh, and you can't forget she likes to have the tongue of her shoe sticking out over her pant leggs. She likes to get dirty, she isn't scared of getting a little bit of mudd under her nails or anything. Her mind and my mind are completely different thinking. I love her right to death but she is aqward at times.

1 comment:

johngoldfine said...

The contrast essays work this way--graf 2 is about your amd Morgan's personalities, graf 3 about your and her attitudes, graf 4 is about your and her different lifestyles.

It looks to me as if you're trying something different--a whole graf about Morgan, then one about you...and that's going to wind up being a four graf essay.

But you've got excellent details, and this should be strong on the content.